tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2037233117204462620.post7311710783737359022..comments2008-05-07T16:18:25.507-07:00Comments on Aurora Borealis at Twilight: Candidates to face off on Iraq at Hill hearingsMandahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04374433510272301565noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2037233117204462620.post-88352811147991315652008-04-10T11:31:00.000-07:002008-04-10T11:31:00.000-07:00You have done a really great job crafting a summar...You have done a really great job crafting a summary and rhetorical analysis. <BR/>The one addition I would suggest is a better usage of quotes from the actual article. For example, you tell the reader that the author uses colloquial phrases, but you do not go on to provide an instance of such from the article. Your overall analysis would be even stronger if you provided examples from the text after you make an assertion.Treyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08674618764155274484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2037233117204462620.post-88760900388726061612008-04-10T11:18:00.000-07:002008-04-10T11:18:00.000-07:00This is a nicely written summary and rhetorical an...This is a nicely written summary and rhetorical analysis. I like how you spend a good amount of time discussing the writer's prose and professionality. You do a very nice job explaining how this distracts from the writer's actual purpose. One thing that I might argue is that it might not be his place to come to a conclusion, more to present the facts and allow the reader to arrive at their own conclusion.mswatzellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01490439076380674328noreply@blogger.com